Toy on the Beach

by Strongbana

1567 mo359(2.6 avg)
ADillustration

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Gay_Cardboard· Mar 3rd

Review - I agree with OwO, which is quite often at this point. The only thing I disagree with is the 180, it feels very jarring, would have been better if she was more hesitant to try a BJ, then just diving in headfirst (literally). It does get a few points cause its funny, and the narrators response "cause it's for the plot" that got me laughing. Although it does beg the question of how she was able to hear the narrator. Anyways the sex is hot. But I always say that I need a story to . . . . .

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Gay_Cardboard· Mar 3rd

Replying to Gay_Cardboard

. . . feel connected. Without a story, my Twink self gets bored too quickly. And there's a few plot gaps, like how did she fall, and how did she get unstuck. Oh. NVM, she got pushed. Anyways, its not a favorite of mine, but it's not horrendous, for me, 6.9/10 👍

FurryFutaLover· Feb 27th

Lovely art style, but the dorect and lazy implication that rape becomes a desired source of pleasure and want never sits well with me.

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Aedion· Feb 26th

I pretty much agree with owo. It was a good comic, a little bare bones, but I feel that was the objective. This was an average comic with pretty good art.

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OwO· Feb 25th

I do think it definitely does detract from the comic a bit, just how instant that 180 was though. I'm going to give this the average on my scale at a 5/10, the art and sex themselves are great but the characterization is a bit flip-floppy and it lacks and plot to speak of. I know I said I couldn't really fault it for it, but those are still valuable metrics on my scale that just aren't represented here, so I think it balances itself out.

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OwO· Feb 25th

Review - It's a fun bit of sex, which is absolutely what this comic is going for. It's hard to fault it on any lack of story or character interactions because that's not the point of the comic, but it does still feel a bit barebones because of it. That said, the INSTANT 180 from "bunch of unhelpful drunks, this is NOT what I wanted for my vacation" to "LEMME SUCK YOUR DICK LIFEGUARD INSTEAD OF GETTING OUT OF HERE" is genuinely hilarious to me.

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