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Thank you all so much for the positive comments. This is my first time ever writing anything like this, i am definitely not a professional lol, But there is much more to come, page 14 is already out too
"De gustibus non est disputandum". The story is quite original and the drawing look good, but I won't give a rating until I see the ending.

Idk pen i dont rly like it either

I do not get this comic… why are yall rating it so high?

I also just realized I haven’t rated it. 9.5/10 good stuff

I just realized…is this MLP?

We didn't even need new pages but today the yiff gods have blessed us.

Man I wish I could get results like this with my prostate. Can’t wait for the rest ! Also @Atlus-Kai that’s some good stuff you were on xD

Surnym's New Pouch, the comic directly after Proto Piracy and directly before Rookie's Cookie

I gave a 10/10 to what now?

I don't know what the fuck I was smoking when I made this review but it must be the same stuff Kai had. This is an easy 8/10. (Also Kai you already gave a 10/10 to Surnym's New Pouch)

My first ever 10/10

To be fair... I was really high that night so idk

Over all this comic was so arousing I felt a being of cosmic power appear behind and tell me "my time was not up, I have a deeper purpose in life, the prophecy calls for one such as thee. One such as the fourth son of a fourth son to his family, with silver eyes and an untapped potential for magic will one day call upon the powers of heaven and pour down unto the void and preserve life as we know it"

I must say: there is a slight chance that is the absolute hottest comic I've ever read EVER. To put it into words, all the characters not only look sexually appealing personally, but they also act accordingly to their unique designs and are diverse. That aside, there is of course the unserious dialogue, but I do seem to notice it only comes from Enduro as all other characters so I think that's intentional.

I'm a little tired and discombobulated so I'll rate the new specimens tomorrow, happy gooning!

Actually I can confirm that they do hurt, but only for a moment

@OwO it's an illusion @muneon, I find them really hot

I realy hate the cages. And they are in so manny comics. Those just look like they hurt so much

Hornyenoughtomakeaccount Nah, they talk multiple times here about a contract length and ask for explicit consent to extend it. I don't think they're leaving anytime soon but that's almost certainly their choice

@OwO bold of you to assume they were actually gonna let him leave

Review - I like it, this is cute. Consent with the explicit option to back out if one so wishes, easy bonus points. The art's good, and though the dialogue is a bit difficult to track at times it's still functional. I'll say a 6.5/10.

The story is kinda bad. The artstyle is good. The dialogues are a bit hard to follow at times cuz the vignettes seem to follow randomized patterns. Not a fan of boobs either. And damn what even are those ugly ass lips at the first page. And how did bro not even notice he had breasts until they got THAT big 4/10 (it'd be a 5/10 without boobs and a 6/10 with an improved storyline)
I love this <3