Review - This is a great continuation of the first chapter. I do stick to my previous critique of pain not really being as big a focus as I'd like it to be given what this story is, but this is still really hot. I'll say a 6/10, certainly room for improvement as far as the narrative goes but the sex itself is still great.
Review - This is a great continuation of the first chapter. I do stick to my previous critique of pain not really being as big a focus as I'd like it to be given what this story is, but this is still really hot. I'll say a 6/10, certainly room for improvement as far as the narrative goes but the sex itself is still great.