Alpha - Chapter 7

by James Howard

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AcedaCelestialderg· Jul 31st

Been following this series since before the website rebranded, i love it.

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Vaiinted32· Mar 23rd

Please choose a better colour palette next time.. black on purple is a complete nightmare to read..

SlimeRancher· Aug 4th

Replying to Vaiinted32

Glasses.

Shreck6666· Nov 22nd

For anyone confused, this isn't the full chapter this is like 1/3rd of it

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Pen· Sep 7th

I stand corrected… why. Why does it always turn into cheating. Ah but it is futile…

MacShee· Sep 6th

It's been 3 days I started to read this comics from the start , it's such a very good comic with some hot stuff the could burn all your desire, I can't imagine those 3 work on such a relationship, but now it's different maybe there something Al's need to fix

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Vixen_likesbirds· Sep 4th

SO GOOD!!! quality was kinda bad mid comic but storytelling ALWAYS gets me! Can't wait for another chapter! AWSOME ART!! gotta love your stuff!

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ZephyrusLLC· Sep 1st

what was the insane quality drop in the middle of the comic?

1GoodBoy· Sep 1st

Oh and my rating is 7/10

1GoodBoy· Sep 1st

Me personaly i dont care that there wasnt sex like kai saif its really good fuckin writing and i can tell that the writer put a lot of thought into this also kai im a big fan

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Stretchxpert· Sep 1st

So... they didn't add the sex yet BUT- THEY ADDED MORE AMAZING FUCKING WRITING!

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The_Great_Pencil_One· Sep 1st

Yeah…I have to zoom in on every. Single. Text. Bubble. On my phone

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MrChooseup· Sep 1st

I have only one complaint about this chapter: purple background with black text is a no-go. I can't read half of what she's saying. Other than that, great story!

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The_Great_Pencil_One· Sep 1st

Hooow can you stop THERE?? I need more!! (BTW, wow this is a big dump)

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Spring87· Aug 31st

Not too sure what is going on in some of the pages as the ratio changes from full width to default, that and the teachers dialogue -purple and black- makes this a little challenging to read. Overall though, I'm liking it

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The_Great_Pencil_One· Aug 22nd

Hi @a_silly_little_guy, welcome to the club

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Pen· Aug 22nd

That was… i’m shocked… I thought she was actually gonna cheat since… let’s be honest when do they not in these comics?

a_silly_little_guy· Aug 21st

10/10. When I read this for the first time, I actually expected something to unfold... like just... normal sex iounno... but this turned out to be quite heartwretching. (Also hi everyone! :3)

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DNAstrid· Aug 21st

This was absolute amazing writing. As a writer myself, although I delve towards the horror side. This dumbfounded me with good writing. James Howard, congrats on being amazing. 10/10 storytelling and artstyle

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ImuTheGod· Aug 20th

Honestly, out of the many many comics and such I've read on this website... I can confidently say that Silver Soul and this series are the tip-top of my list... 10/10 so far for me.

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Yourlocaldealer· Aug 19th

Just read the other pages in their account and boi it's soul shattering

SnowGlobe365· Aug 19th

This isn't the end of the chapter. It's not even halfway through.

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Devuis· Aug 19th

This now definitely confused me. A porn comic with no porn and just lore, very very interesting. What will be in chap 8 I wonder.

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The_Great_Pencil_One· Aug 19th

I mean I don’t understand how this ties in with the rest of the series…is it a flashback or something? Or am I just stupid? I feel like I missed an entire chapter. (Yes, I read chap. 6)

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f4ction· Aug 19th

very nice!!! one note- its espresso, not expresso. but cool!! <3

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Stretchxpert· Aug 19th

8.6/10 writing!!!

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Stretchxpert· Aug 19th

This isn't porn this is just amazing fucking writing!

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Stretchxpert· Aug 19th

well that's what I get for thinking this was gonna be simple

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The_Great_Pencil_One· Aug 19th

I’m…confused. To say the least.

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